The Final Stand – rewrite. Apr 2022

This lyric I wrote with a kind of Leonard Cohen type intent. I can’t sing so I turned it into a painting (see foot of page) . It’s about climate change. We may all one day become victims of it: this is a cautionary tale. It may come from solar flares or from our neglect of the atmosphere. Who knows?

Talented Canadian Francois Dube put some music to these words (MP3 link below).

François Dubé
Les Productions Dubémol
613-769-3975
http://www.dubemol.com
http://www.francoisdube.com

A sudden shard of music

A god-forsaken start

An archangel spirit moving

Through the valley of my heart

A rising tonal ending

A loss of inner faith

A gradual climate warming

A snaking smoky wraith

In stopping endless errors

Could have been a narrow win

But the global lords kept selling

Their thinly lauded sin

And so I slowly walked on

And spoke of many who had lied

But all around I saw that

All final hope had died

I walked to seek an answer

I walked to beat a drum

I walked to build a future

When I knew that there was none.

The epoch end was coming

Backs stretched across the wire

The final stand of Adam

Against solar swords of fire.

A hidden labyrinth

A place for us to run?

A percussive silent sound

Tracer bullets from the sun

There were some words of warning

In ancient bible verse

Our refuge, just a last hope

Prelude to something worse

Earth’s fortress neatly breached

Many wondered why

The masses meekly mingled

Blank faces to the sky

They could have heard my story

When the Earth began to burn

They could have made a difference

Now that difference lies astern

But I finally guessed the answer

On the road to Jeremiah

That the seed for new beginning

Needed stubble from the fire

There is now no sea, the land is black

We pray but God ain’t here

The sky blood-red and airless

All beyond repair

The final stand is on us

Believers and deniers

The final stand, the final stand

On this earthly ball of fire

The fiery end of mankind

As we return

And sink

….. into the mire.

Copyright: Rod de Lisle/Francois Dube.

ORIGINAL VERSION.

A sudden shard of music

A god-forsaken start

An archangel spirit moving

Through the valley of my heart

A rising tonal ending

A loss of inner faith

A gradual climate warming

A snaking smoky wraith


In stopping endless errors

Could be a peasant win

But the global lords kept selling

Their thinly lauded sin


And still you slowly walked on

And spoke of many who had lied

But all around you saw that

All shallow hope had died

You walked to seek an answer

You walked to beat a drum

You walked to build a future

When you knew that there was none.

The epoch end was coming

Backs stretched across the wire

The final stand of Adam

Against solar swords of fire.


A hidden labyrinth

A place for us to run

A percussive silent sound

Tracer bullets from the sun

A last kiss was an apple

A bible stated curse.

A single word of wisdom

In ancient nonsense verse

Our fortress neatly breached

No one wondered why

The masses meekly mingled

Their faces to the sky


And still you slowly walked on

And spoke of many who had lied

But all around you saw that

All shallow hope had died

You walked to seek an answer

You walked to beat a drum

You walked to build a future

When you knew that there was none.

The epoch end was coming

Our backs against the wire

The final stand of Adam

A climatic funeral pyre


They could have heard your story

When the Earth began to burn

They could have made a difference

Now that difference lies astern

But you finally guessed the answer

On the road to Jeremiah

That the seed for new beginning

Needed stubble from the fire


The epoch end was coming

Our backs against the wire

The final stand of Adam

As we return into the mire.

The epoch end was coming

Backs stretched against the wire

The final stand of Adam

Against solar swords of fire.

Copyright: Rod de Lisle

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